Hello! This is another progress update for the comic “Meta-memorial” (working title), after I made some changes to the beginning, and took a different direction with the art. I included a roughly sketched panel in the end, because I think the text in the conversation on that panel gives a better idea of where this is going. This is the first part, and covers around 30-40% of the comic.
I like the little cars in the screen, they remind me of Calvin and Hobbes.
I’m seeing more clearly the whole story now, and I believe it’ll work. But I won’t know for sure until further down the road. This tale seems to be one of the tricky ones, where there’s a constant temptation of changing words here and there. I hope it’s satisfying in the end.
Thanks!
