Moving forward with the comic. (This part starts with a couple of previous panels for context) Around 70% done, perhaps?
Some notes:
I’m still not satisfied with the drawing of “her”. I tried a different technique first, an all fuzzy, grainy art, but I couldn’t achieve what I had in mind. Just like our MC, I was unable to bring her to life that way. Greg, on the other hand, was ready in the first, quick drawing. He was right there.
Still not decided on the way to depict the park background. Once it’s settled, I’ll homogenize it in the comic, because I’ve been trying different things. Same with the color of “online”.
I liked the emojis balloons. In the last part, I’ll also try out something to bring the flow of phone scrolling to the comic language. I hope it works.
We have a title drop!


